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You walked around the alleys, through short-cuts, roads, estates, until...
-Here we are! – You exclaimed happily, clenching your fists in pride.
You successfully found "Club Carbon".
It was the biggest and loudest club in the country, even celebrities sometimes visited it. The music was loud, but bad-ass, the drinks could even persuade the Holiest man to do things they'd never do...And the people...
Oh, the people!
You weren't interested in girls, in fact, you counted them as rivals.
Well, sometimes you came around a club or two with your friends, Elizabeta and Bella, sometimes with Natalia, but today was not the case.
You were looking for a good guy to have fun with for this night.
The Office work was just too much of a pain for you. Really. Your boss, who was a pilot in her young days, now became a grumpy old fatso. She enjoyed telling you to work, and your hatred for her grew in the past weeks. Now you wished for nothing more than a wonderful night of fun.
Suddenly, the hairs on your neck stood up, shivers ran down your spine and a cold air hit you.
Someone was watching you.

Saw you standing in the dark and I like your energy
I'm feeling you way from afar, boy you're distracting me
My heart is racing, body's aching, and I'm shaking all because of you
(It's something about you)

You turned around and saw a figure leaning on the wall covered in graffiti. It was clearly a man, a man with messy hair and gleaming eyes in the shade
He was wearing loose tracksuit bottoms and a plain t-shirt, but the way he stood there, and the way his arms were crossed over his felt blood starting to drip from your nose slowly. You quickly took your sleeve and wiped it.
- Seriously, ______? Nose-bleeding over a stranger?! But he clearly IS checking me out! - You thought to yourself, raising a brow.
You quickly turned around and approached the big man standing at the queue.
-Bill, could you? Someone is checking me out! – You hissed, and the big man nodded, holding up the curtains of the entrance for you.
Bill was a good friend of yours, you met him at another club, and became friends since then. After he told you he was going to have a night shift at "Club Carbon", you immediately wanted to go there.
-Thanks, I owe you one. – You winked and he smiled understandingly at you.
As you entered, the dark dance floor was visible, many people gathered in already, the music banged at your ears. You walked over to the bar, sitting at one of the leather stools, ordering some beer.
- Why is this guy stuck in my head?! - You mentally slapped yourself.

Now I'm thinking 'bout who you with
'Cause you got me curious
If you don't come closer Imma have a fit

You swirled your finger on the rim of the glass, that was now half-empty, deep in thought over the strange man you saw.
Truth to be told, you DID get a nose bleed. And true, you wondered if he felt the same way about you. He, after all, WAS checking you out.
This was enough for you.
- I swear my mind is seriously fucked right now. - You sighed, standing up and quickly joining the crowd that danced on the dance floor like there was no tomorrow.
You had to admit, the club was impressive – the people were all hyper, hungry for lust, or just wanting a nice evening with others. The music was brand new, up-beat and just great to dance to and the DJs, that occasionally made a mash-up, did well. The drinks were well served, a nice lemon or lime on the rim of the glass...everything was great.
Except for one thing.
The thought of the mysterious man.

Tell me boy what you thinking too
Gotta know if you feel the same way I do
Talk to me

You swayed your hips to the beat, closing your eyes and enjoying the feeling. Suddenly, a pair of strong arms wrapped around your waist, and you slowly, even teasingly turned around to eyes! ((A/N: You would never expect this! XD))
-Ohonhonhonhon~ Ma cherie, you are the most perfect of them all today~ Mind sharing this dance with me? – The blonde man said, and you guessed he was French by the accent.
You also didn't like the remark of "today". What does he mean by that?! You look great EVERY DAY! Not just TODAY!
Just as you were planning on pushing him away, someone did it for you.
The French flirt was ripped off from your body by someone who made your lungs stop working and you held your breath.

I can be your lady, you can be my baby
So don't keep me waiting
I wanna be touched, wanna be touched

-France, get off her. She's mine.
It was him ! You barely stopped yourself from squealing. Perverted thoughts flooded your mind. It was CRAZY.
The French man walked away, pouting as the man from before came closer to you. You didn't object.

'Cause I've got this problem, only you can solve it
But you gotta come to me
I wanna be touched, wanna be touched

He placed his hands on your hips and you dug your fingers in his silvery hair.
You both knew where this was going to – so better say each others' names now, right?
His sleek fingertips gently slipped under the rim of your shirt, going over the sides of your waist teasingly.

I wanna be touched, wanna be touched, touched

You bucked your hips onto his, receiving a sexy grunt from him.
-So, _______, vhat brings you to Club Carbon? – He asked, you guessed he was German, or somewhere from those regions by his deep accent.
You shrugged.
-Probably the stress. Y'know, just came here to check out the club and have fun. – You answered, wrapping your arms around his neck.
-Mean boss?
-Mean bitch.
Gilbert laughed out, you grinned sexily back at him.
-Y'know what I mean?
-Believe me, I know much more than I vant. – He shook his head, his hands going up and down from your waist over to your chest and back down again, sending shivers down your spine. Let's be honest, he was making you wet.
You were one lucky girl – swaying your hips like there's no tomorrow, with a SEX GOD glued to your curves, clearly WILLING to be yours.
-Do you know...want to get each other better, like all these girls? – He asked, raising a slim brow in curiosity.
-Well, I'd like to. But it's be a waste of such a wonderful night if we just talk and giggle. – You both nodded with sly grins as you said it.

Ya gotta get to know me first and we can take it further
And I can't help but flirt, 'cause I'd be crazy if I let you leave without your number
Boy don't make me wait too long for you
(I just wanna get to know you)

You slipped your hand into the pocket of your denim shorts, quickly finding a piece of folded paper and you took it out, slipping it onto Gilbert's palm.
-Call me if you want to get to know me better~ - You whispered huskily into his ear, and smirked when you felt him shiver from the closeness of your breath on him.
That famous smirk of his came back sooner than you thought, and he ALSO took out a folded paper from his pocket, and held it between his index and middle finger.
-Are you willing to take my awesomeness, Frau? Are you sure you can handle the Five meters of Awesomeness? – He murmured, raising a brow at you again, this time suggestively.
-How about we first check out the theory of them Five meters? – Your grin only widened.

Now I'm thinking 'bout who you with
'Cause you got me curious
If you don't come closer Imma have a fit
Tell me boy what you thinking too
Gotta know if you feel the same way I do
Talk to me

His slender fingers grazed your spine lightly, and you couldn't help but to arch your back forward to him slightly, your chest touching his. You knew he had some muscle under that damn shirt he was wearing, mainly from your constant touching of him.
But you knew this wasn't enough.
You wanted to be touched.
And I mean, touched like there's no tomorrow.
Of course, you didn't doubt him at all – in fact, you were expecting some damn hell of a night~ And we mean the GOOOOOOOOOOD hell~

I can be your lady, you can be my baby
So don't keep me waiting
I wanna be touched, wanna be touched

His mesmerizing crimson orbs looked deeply into yours. You couldn't help but smirk as you saw the way his eyes were clouded with hunger and lust. Damn, you were pretty sure your eyes were exactly the same~

'Cause I've got this problem, only you can solve it
But you gotta come to me
I wanna be touched, wanna be touched

-We'll see how beautiful you are once you take this off~ - He pulled at the rim of your shirt lightly. You grazed your fingertips over his muscled chest as a new song came on.
-Damn, Frau~ You're so hot~ You're making a devil like me sweat vhen I look at you! – He laughed into your ear, licking the outer shell of it, making you shiver with excitement once more.
You forgot about everything. About your annoying boss. About your best friends, probably wondering where you were right now. About everything.
That man.
That man was the only person on your mind right now. And nothing else mattered.
-You can't say much yourself, Mr. Awesome~ I have goose-bumps when I touch you~ - You murmured. You weren't lying – the goose-bumps were present on your skin since you noticed him checking you out back at the Club's entrance.

I never believed in love at first sight
But you made me wanna give it a try
You won't regret it, boy if you let me in

His sleek hands cupped your cheeks, his thumbs making circles over your cheekbones. You seriously had enough of his teasing right now.
You smashed your lips onto his, startling him a bit with your directness, but just for a brief second. His fingers moved from your cheeks to your loose hair, lacing themselves happily.
You, on the other hand, slid your hands down to his shirt and dug them under, grazing his chest. It worked.
His mouth opened slightly, a deep growl coming from his mouth. You took the opportunity and slid your tongue into his mouth, soon the both of you were fighting for dominance, which you won over a while with your stubbornness.

I can be your lady, you can be my baby
So don't keep me waiting
I wanna be touched, wanna be touched

You explored him mouth by every centimetre, well-aware of the saliva tricking down the both of your chins, sweat covering your foreheads.
Was it just you or did the Club just turned up to 100 degrees?
You felt Gilbert suck on your top lip.
- Damn, why is he so good with this?! - You asked yourself mentally, moaning into the "kiss" slightly.
He slowly withdrew from it, wiping his chin with a smirk as a passer-by in the club shouted "Get a room, you two!" from away.

'Cause I've got this problem, only you can solve it
But you gotta come to me
I wanna be touched, wanna be touched

-Say, ______...Vant to continue this somewhere less-crowded? – He growled into your ear, the hairs on your neck standing up once more.
-Hell yes~ - And with that, he grasped your hand, leading you away from the dance floor.

This is a S-O-N-G-F-I-C.
The song is called "Touched" by BoA...and it's damn good. Have a listen, matches Mr. Prussia perfectly. :iconsexyprussiaplz:

This has been requested by :iconhyperactivnitwit:
And I'm sorry it took so long! I was grounded for AGEZZZ. :iconcryforeverplz:
BUT HEY! LE MOI IS BACK! :iconevilgrinplz:

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Hetalia, the song, or the picture.
Just the plot.
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Carrie3339 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
Benio Nose Bleed Icon Racing Girl Emoji (Nose Bleed) [V3] 
Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Seal Icon when i see dat bae Nosebleeds fondo blanco The Monkey With the Nosebleed Nosebleed :nosebleed: Nosebleed Plz Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] Freddy Nosebleed :nosebleed: Icon - 019 Oliver (Nosebleed) Emoji: Nosebleed Sparkle nosebleed Ria Approves Icon Nosebleedfall 
zheawesomeonejv1 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is freaking epiiic
BrazilTheAwesome Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nosebleed Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] nosebleed  Dayumn. Best story ever.L4D2: Ellis Smirk  But I fell out of my chair having a nosebleed after I read itDerpy 
MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlazybloodplz: blood loss...too great... I'm dead...:iconimdedplz:
breezyblossom Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooooo.... kpop. c:
poop4689 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years

plz don't judge me on this it was a dare

midnightstealer Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
I never have good luck Wth relationships 
MortalInstruments14 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Ok I officially love you ans have died of a nosebleed:nosebleed: The Monkey With the Nosebleed 
Hetaliafangirl1997 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
This seriously needs a lemon!!! >\\\\\\<
KittyKirkland Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh.....m.........G! Sexy Gilly!!!!! XD
HetaliaLover696969 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
Ooohhh, maaaiii~. :iconpervyspainplz: You did a great job on this~.
KalishRalich Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Writer
Mom Walks In My Room
Mom: HollyBerries (She Calls Me That)Why Are You Bleeding?
Me:I Tripped And Fell Face First On The Floor No Biggy*Sheepish Smile*
mangaluver27 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lemon please
AndyPandicorn Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student Writer
Well that escalated quickly..
Oh and I think you should use quotation marks for when someone's talking..
MarveltherealMC123 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn. Gilbert is so frickin SEXY!!!
puffenferlife Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Scratches back of neck and stares at puddle on floor
Anju213 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
celebi1 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
Hot hot hot hot hot hothot
lilmissbeilschmidt Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
Goodness shit i'm running tp the bathroom cuz i'm actually wet now...
JazzyLick Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
My deduction from all of this:
My boss was a butthead.


LOL just kidding, I frickin' died. [But still...eff-ing BOOOOOSS]
technavslol Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What the hell? My nose is FUCing BLEEED- :iconovariesplz:.. *nose is still bleeding even with the pain without ovaries :iconpervplz: *
Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
.....and BOOM go my ovaries :iconovariesplz:
highlove10 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love this I need more :love:
WHAT THE FU- :iconovariesplz:
bdolphin15 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that is exactly how i felt!!!!!!
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
I had too much fun reading this.
24pastels Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
this is awesome! Will you be making another Prussia x reader anytime soon? You're amazing at them <3
Saphirayalena Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
LOL I laughed so hard when France randomly appeared! And of course Prussia is just as awsone as ever!
Silvermoonlitsoul Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why were you grounded,aru?~ :iconwoahplz:
kendallla Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
OMGZ Gilbert's accent is FUCKING HOT!!! Btw love your use of fuck xD
LulzAwesomeCakes Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
AkitaSadure Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
Love your icon~ :iconifuknowwhatimeanplz:
LulzAwesomeCakes Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
ty, XD..... it's not mine :iconsweatdropplz:
AkitaSadure Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Writer
LulzAwesomeCakes Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
loveygirl2345 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AkitaSadure Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
menoux Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol you seemed to be enjoying this by how you narrated the story!:XD:
AkitaSadure Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
I DID INDEED! :iconspainapprovedplz:
menoux Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
fluffy-maple-vodka Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
MYGOD! AAAAAAHHHHH :iconexcitedblushplz: :iconpervplz: This seriously gave me goosebumps xD I love love love this~ :heart:
"France, get off her. She's /mine./"
AkitaSadure Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student Writer
Hahahaha I wanted to put a small surprise into it, so FRANCUUUUUU is here~ xD And thank you, I'm gald you liked it! :iconkisskisskissplz:
fluffy-maple-vodka Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
yeah since France-niisama really likes to flirt with alot of girls xD
you're welcome! :D
Ozumii Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
AkitaSadure Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Student Writer
Silvermoonlitsoul Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why were you grounded,aru?~ OwO
AkitaSadure Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Writer
I spent too much time on the computer XD
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